Exercise 1

Not sure if i did this one right. it said "Describe the memory in a series of images" so thats what I tried to do. Any feed back would be greatly appreciated. Thanks, have a good one

Image 1

It is Andrew’s 7th birthday and he is very excited wearing a bright orange shirt and navy blue shorts. He is in the kitchen with his mum, who is wearing a white blouse and she is telling him that their dog (a white husky) has escaped onto the old golf course, which their house backs on to. Her look is quite serious while Andrew’s is just happy.

Image 2

Andrew is running through a beautifully green golf course and it is a fine Scottish summer day with only a few clouds in the sky. He is running fast pretending he is an airplane with his arms spread out. He spots the white dog about 500 meters away, and gets excited, and starts to call out the name “storm”.

Image 3

The dog has thick white fur and is in a patch of knee high plants. He is looking at Andrew innocently as Andrew reaches him. Andrew steps into the patch of high green plants to bring his dog home when suddenly he freezes. As he looks down at the plants that are touching his legs all over up to his knees, he starts to scream as he realises he is standing in a batch of nettles.